Help with expansion announcement

[gato25]

As mentioned in the other topic I'm hiring an actual employee :shock: and it's happening an entire month sooner than I had anticipated. So... I need help from the writers around here, I need a short single paragraph announcement suitable for printing on a postcard, that lets my existing clients know that we will now have a new therapist.

I also need a two paragraph announcement for my homepage on my website that says the same thing, plus announces some upgraded services, such as 2 hour sessions, and (I think) hot stone therapy.

Any help would be greatly appreciated, because I'm heading for a huge case of writer's block after spending most of the afternoon on the employment contract.

 

[Lakota]

I hope you get some good ideas. I know it helps me when I can look at something and cut, paste, edit, tweek, etc....

Breathe Bodywork is pleased to introduce Suzie Q, LMT who has joined our team. Suzie is a Licensed Massage Therapist who graduated form Healing Hands Massage School. She effectively uses a variety of techniques including Swedish, Deep Tissue, Trigger Point Therapy and Hot Stone Massage to relieve muscle tension and improve overall health and well-being. Her empathy and concern for every client shows in every massage she does. I look forward to you experiencing Suzie’s wonderful massage first hand.

New Additions!

Breathe Bodywork is pleased to announce that Suzie Q, LMT has joined our staff. Suzie is a Licensed Massage Therapist who graduated form Healing Hands Massage School. She effectively uses a variety of techniques including Swedish, Deep Tissue, Trigger Point Therapy and Hot Stone Massage to relieve muscle tension and improve overall health and well-being. Her empathy and concern for every client shows in every massage she does. I look forward to you experiencing Suzie’s wonderful massage first hand.

In addition we have upgraded our services. Your stress will melt away in our new Hot Stone Massage. As the stones become an extension of the massage they will sink into your muscles to provide both relaxation and relief from aches and pains. We are also offering extended sessions up to two hours in length on all our modalities. Please see our Rates tab for more information on pricing and the sessions.

 

[Pompal 09.]

I think Sherri did a great job with the wording, if I think of anything I'll post again, in the meantime though...

Will you be coming up with a particular "special" for your new MT employee? Will she be offering special pricing or a special "add on" which will lead some of your clients to want to give her a try instead of seeing you?

 

[wo1f4me]

Thank you Sherri! Exactly what I had in mind. Maestra, I'm not offering special introductory pricing. I'm also trying to figure out how to handle my package discounts. I've hired because I can't handle my existing clients and new/GC clients both. She is aware that there is no guarantee of clients/hours and that things will ramp up slowly. I'm also putting it in the contract, (and I guess in the handbook.)